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Title: Defining Sight Length, Draft, Language: 95,013. First Draft. English. Summary: The most powerful mind on the planet belongs to an unlikely host, seventeen-year-old Cian Withers. Cian knows he is...

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Title: Shadows of Real (working title) Length, Draft and Language 45000 words and counting, Draft 1.5, English Brief Summary In a post-industrial world that uses science in the form of magic, three...

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Title- Alternate Endings, Origin 52,361 words. Second draft. English Summary- Set aboard a spaceship that left earth 1200 years ago in search of habitable planets, a young man, Falcon, works with...

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Title: Won't Somebody Think of the Children? Length, Draft and Language: 47,000 words, second draft, English Brief Summary: When Tom and Melanie find out that they're the first parents in their...

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Title: The Grand Tour Length, Draft and Language: 55,494, second draft, English Brief Summary: After getting a mysterious package, Doctor Rinkler and his young apprentice, Thomas, embark on a journey...

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Operation Hammer 50,000 words, 1st edition, english language Brief Summary In the midst of crisis true heroes are born. Steve Nole is a victim of heroism. In the middle of a rebellion he successfully...

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Title: Anomalous Length, Draft, and Language: 23, 246, First (just starting the second draft), English Brief Summary/Pitch (not more than 300 words): The government completely controls almost every...

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Title: Surviving the Future Length, Draft, and Language: 48,000 words, 2nd draft, English Summary The world is a very different place after the collapse of mankind. Genetic engineering, nano-machines,...

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Title: KLESHAS, PART I - TO BE REBORN Length, Draft and Language: Length - will be about 32,000 words (novella), currently working on second draft, English language Brief Summary/Pitch (not more than...

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Title- Flying Higher than the Sky Length, Draft and Language-15058 Second Draft(Hence small word count) English Brief Summary- In the year 3030, two earths collide. One governed by NASA and the other...

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Title: Supremacy (but I might change this later) Length, Draft and Language: 50018 and counting, I'm not finished yet. English Brief Summary: Three teenagers return home one day to find their home has...

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Title: The Man in The Moon Length: 3522, first draft, English Brief Summary: It's a short story, about loneliness. Sub Genre & Keywords - loneliness, depression, short story, realization Known...

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Title Wake (working title) Length, Draft and Language – 66,231 first draft, English Brief Summary: Barry Asquith is in his mid-sixties with a successful art career, wife and grown daughter. As a...

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Title: Freeze Length, Draft and Language: 56,000 words, first draft, English Brief Summary: Freeze takes place in 2325, almost two centuries after an event known as the Reset decimated most of the...

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Title: Proserpine III Length, Draft and Language: ~60,000 words, 3rd Draft, English Brief Summary (not more than 300 words): Almira is a Crafter, a telepathic, telekinetic slave belonging to one of the...

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Title: The Continuum Length, Draft and Language: ~50,000 words; somewhere between 2nd and 3rd draft; English Brief Summary Elise works for a time travel agency that allows clients to become tourists in...

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Title: The Secret King - The Beginning Currently 60k not quite finished, although aiming to this month With their sun dying, Kendro, King of The Aonise fights to save his people from total...

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Perspective 51705, Third (Might be final) Draft, English Brief Summary This was actually my 2009 NaNo novel which I've done some extensive editing to since then. It is a Science-Fiction/Suspense story...

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Working Title: Ibayu Length, Draft and Language: ~48k, second draft, English Brief Summary (not more than 300 words): The Empire is crumbling, pushed to the brink of destruction by the man who brought...

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Title StraightLength, Draft and Language 57200 words, Draft 1.5, EnglishBrief Summary Drew may have kicked the wirehead addiction, may have gotten the monkey off his back and the Multinational off his...

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Title: Alien (working title) Length, Draft and Language: 13k, first draft, English Brief Summary (not more than 300 words): Madison has been homeless for three years. She's been in and out of group...

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Title: Skeiron Length, Draft and Language: 52,000, first-and-a-half, English Brief Summary: A human colony occupies two planets and a satellite in a solar system far enough from our own to completely...

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Title: PaxLength, Draft and Language: Appx. 60,000 words (and growing), First Draft, EnglishBrief Summary (not more than 300 words): Twenty three human beings survive a horrific accident and find...

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Title: The Primary Escapes: Yellow 75,000 Words, Pretty polished draft, English Renee fled a concentration camp in 1944 only to be stuck under the bed of the boy who’d watched her family be sent there....

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Jessamy (Working title, I know there's a book with the same) 56,823, second draft, English In 1889, Claude Scholes turned down an opportunity to join a scientific expedition to a new planet. Almost 200...

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Title: Bloody Notes Length, Draft and Language: 51789, First draft, English Brief Summary: It is 1888 London, and Jack the Ripper is at large. Scotland Yard has just received information of a double...

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Title: Judge on a Boat Length, Draft and Language: 50,482 words, first draft, English Brief Summary: In this future, rationality tutors called "Senseis" have spread critical thinking and scientific...

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Welcome to the critiques forum! This thread is for you to find critiques, beta partners, and feedback for your book. Note that it is NOT intended for you to ask for work to critique. If you want to...

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Title: DUSK.exe Length, Draft and Language: Around 90,00 words, fifth draft, English Brief Summary: It's the first month of 2030, the year foretold to be the onset of Transhumanism, the milestone of...

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Title: I don't have one yet, i.e. I'm open to suggestions! Length, Draft and Language: 50,901 Words, still a rough/1st draft, American English Brief Summary (not more than 300 words): Upon learning of...

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Title: Out of the Ordinary Length, Draft and Language: Exactly 61,058 words. English Language. Completed chapter book for over 5 years, working on completing a trilogy. Brief Summary: A girl named...

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Title: Tempus 

Length, Draft and Language: Roughly 63,000 words, first draft, english 

Brief Summary: After having a vision that she would harm the love of her life and their infant daughter,...

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Title: (not titled yet) Length, Draft and Language: First draft. Currently just under 9,000 words. About a quarter of the story is written. English. Brief Summary: In a dystopian, futuristic America, a...

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Title: (not titled yet) Length, Draft and Language: First draft. Currently just under 9,000 words. About a quarter of the story is written. English. Brief Summary: In a dystopian, futuristic America, a...

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Title: Strella PAX 50K, first draft, English, set 50 years in the future Brief Summary: Polaris is working for PAX, the physic auxiliary unit of the Chicago police force reading the minds of witnesses...

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[Cross-posted from short stories] Title: Birthing Length, Draft and Language: 645 words, polished second draft, English Brief Summary: A midwife in a genetic utopia has a startling insight on her way...

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Hi Unionponi, Your story sounds interesting, and I would be happy to offer critique should you like to share a few chapters. NaNoMail is probably the best way to reach me initially. I realize you...

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Cross-posted from the Short Story thread)Sync Genre: Sci-Fi Length: 3.5 k Draft: Second Language: English Synopsis: War with Earth has decimated the Belter colonies. Sent on one last high-risk mission...

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Story: Sounde I (for July 2013 Camp NaNo) Words: 15000 and still growing. First draft, English Summary: It's your not-so-average story about a terrorist group. Sounde was a group of five, with their...

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Also posted in the short story thread. "--They Call Me Keyless" Length: 3.7k; Draft: 3rd-ish (I do a lot of overlapping drafts); Language: English Brief Summary: An experimental, first-person-POV piece...

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Title: Not Yet Length: 67,493 words Draft: first (but fairly readable) Language: English Brief Summary: Texarkana Wilson can fly, but she's spent her entire life too scared to reveal her abilities....

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It occurs to me that I should have cross-posted this from short stories: Title: Life/Death Pod Genre: SF Length, draft, language: 5400 words, 2nd draft, English Synopsis: A young woman is trapped on a...

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[Cross-posting in short stories] Title: Singular Length, Draft, and Language: 964 words, polished, English Brief Summary: An old man tells students about the day computers became self-aware Sub-Genre...

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Title: Wayward Length, Draft and Language: I’m currently working on the second draft. The whole thing is scattered in pieces around my laptop so I’m not sure exactly how long it is – probably about 40k...

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